panel 1.
close-up of lola's kissing sugar, from where the last page left off. here you can see both of them blushing and sugar's hand gay-touching lola's hair.

panel 2.
sugar's expression starts showing discomfort. she begins to sweat, and her hand begins to clench.

panel 3.
a wide panel. now it's revealed lola included a little bonus with her kiss. sugar turns to cough a puff of smoke out of her throat, and pushes lola away with her foot. lola's looking pleased about successfully delivering the smoke.
dialog:
Sugar: FUCK!! <> YOU DIDn'T Have To BrEatHe iT Down my ThroAT YOU /ASS/-

panel 4.
bust shot of lola, holding up the bong now that sugar's foot is no longer in her face. she gives a small grin.
dialog/sound effects:
<>
Lola: sorry -- you look like you could use it more than me.

panel 5.
a small panel, zoomed out to show lola's whole body from the couch's front. lola looks down at sugar, who has fallen off of the couch and is grabbing lola's arm from down there.
dialog/sound effect:
Sugar: <> (coughing noises)

panel 6.
same panel size, lola laughs as she realizes something, complete with a thought bubble of a cartoon happy sun.
dialog:
Lola: oooh my GOD. -- your foot is like, a /hand/! -- i JUST got thAt.

panel 7.
a very thin and vertical panel that only shows a bit of the couch, and some motion lines pointing down to the floor.
sound effect:
<>

panel 8.
medium shot at floor level. now we see what panel 7's thump was: sugar pulled lola down onto the floor. lola here is blushing and chuckling as sugar play-pins her down.
dialog:
Sugar: You think it's funny, huh!?
Lola: aaaaa! You're squiSHing meeee!!
Sugar: GOOD! you arrogant twig! -- say sorry!
Lola: i love you-

panel 9.
a zoomed out panel. the angle its at makes the couch obscure all of lola except her legs, and most of sugar too, only her tail and head are poking out, at attention because she just heard the...
dialog/sound effects:
<>
Sugar: !
Lola: !!!

panel 10.
bust shot of sugar. she looks down to lola, whose head is peeking out from the bottom-left corner of the panel.
dialog:
Sugar: can you-
Lola: uhh,

panel 11.
similar angle, but zoomed in a bit, sending lola further off-panel and focusing on sugar's semi-flustered expression.
dialog:
Sugar: ah, right. -- i'll, uh. -- i'll get that.

panel 12.
bust shot of lola, catching her breath. she's using one arm to move her hair out of her face and the other to cover up her chest. she exhales of a puff of breath.


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