strong content warning for themes of suicide and drug use.
2016 Extra Comic (Lola)
2016 Extra Comic (Sugar)
1st Dec 2016, 1:00 PM
Save My Place
Load My Place
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1st Dec 2016, 3:29 PM
'it costs more to keep me than i'm worth' in the present tense :C
1st Dec 2016, 5:36 PM
lolas accent(?) coming out...... is cute..
i like how you portray her and sugars speech changing when they're high. it's 'relatable', as one would say
also, around what age was lola when they went to the one home they're talking about?
1st Dec 2016, 7:54 PM
thank you. she was
about 69 s-
about late 13 or freshly 14.
grocer of despair
1st Dec 2016, 10:04 PM
the amount of panels in the past three pages where lola's top-eyes are narrowed is breaking my heart.
1st Dec 2016, 10:34 PM
yknow ive noticed it earlier but i've always wonder: do the colours of the speech bubbles matter or is it just to differentiate who's talking when it's unclear?
1st Dec 2016, 11:04 PM
it's to differentiate who's talking and make the speech bubbles seem less out of place (they look weird pure white).
at the beginning of the comic, i had never done one before, so i asked for advice and was told i could maybe make them complementary to the colors around them because color-coding would be distracting; ultimately i scrapped that and did color-coding anyway, but at the beginning of the comic, their speech bubbles aren't consistent in color. i plan on fixing that when i redraw the opening scene.
i do try to pick colors i think "fit" their personalities based on what the colors mean, but colors can mean so many different things.
2nd Dec 2016, 12:39 PM
I've always been curious, what was the issue with Lola's hair? Is it something related to their species or is it something they specifically deal with, or is that something that will be elaborated on eventually?
2nd Dec 2016, 4:26 PM
it's related to her race. lola is talking about the fact that she has black hair, which requires specific care and maintenance that most non-black parents are not equipped to handle. the coating around her locs can be dissolved by putting salt on it for a few minutes and isn't really a problem, though it is species-specific, sort of.
2nd Dec 2016, 6:57 PM
Oh, interesting, thank you for the clarification! I wasn't aware her hair was normal hair beneath the coating, I always assumed they were tentacles of some sort.
6th Dec 2016, 2:50 AM
sugar's Weed Face
6th Dec 2016, 11:30 PM
just read through this entire comic at the suggestion of a friend and wow, what an emotional ride. can't wait for future updates, thank you so much for writing this <3
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