omg, you definitely know these characters are written really well by how they aren't just like, one-note about the subject, like, sugar having serious conviction but also appears to be excited at the thought of doing it together, and like, lola answering the call cops question at first with levity but then quickly realizing to take it more seriously and thus answer more seriously
I really love all the camera angles that you put in your pages so far. Also, the story is getting interesting and taking a different turn and vibe than I expected.
I'm hooked. Definitely looking forward to more!
I'm hooked. Definitely looking forward to more!