omg, you definitely know these characters are written really well by how they aren't just like, one-note about the subject, like, sugar having serious conviction but also appears to be excited at the thought of doing it together, and like, lola answering the call cops question at first with levity but then quickly realizing to take it more seriously and thus answer more seriously
I really love all the camera angles that you put in your pages so far. Also, the story is getting interesting and taking a different turn and vibe than I expected.
I'm hooked. Definitely looking forward to more!
intentionally keeping an eye on things based on old comments from you: the shine in lolas eyes and where theyre looking, the scars on their arms, sugar's body language, dates and statements... i read this when it was already complete, and never had the chance to spend time thinking and paying close attention to things the characters said or did. now that im enjoying doing that with fresh meat, im coming back to do it a little here, too.
