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10th Mar 2016, 2:00 PM
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Nobody 10th Mar 2016, 2:00 PM edit delete
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MysteriousJeff 10th Mar 2016, 2:52 PM edit delete reply
I feel this page is a good example of how well you do subtle motion OwO
Guest 10th Mar 2016, 6:17 PM edit delete reply
great pacing! so one of lola's survival instincts is being agreeable... i see... also i just had a thought that i didnt notice before, but it's kinda interesting that sugar looks like a rodent but eats meat, because rodents usually eat grains/seeds, so maybe its like reversal thing. what kind of animal is sugar?
Nobody 10th Mar 2016, 8:09 PM edit delete reply
Nobody
thanks for the comment!

sugar is a hybrid between a sugar glider and a philippine tarsier.

she inherited a lot of her pelage, nose, ears, and brow shape from her sugar glider side. sugar gliders are visually confused for rodents, so often that pet sugar gliders have their incisors trimmed under the false belief that they never stop growing.

meanwhile, she inherited much of her jaw, eyes, and proportions from her tarsier side.
from that side, she also inherited a carnivorous metabolism. tarsiers are the only primate family to be obligate carnivores. here's a picture of a tarsier skull to compare the dental anatomy.
Guest 11th Mar 2016, 3:04 AM edit delete reply
I love the way these characters interact and I'm so excited to learn more about Lola.
OS 13th Mar 2016, 10:46 PM edit delete reply
what a morbid looking diner! it's midday, the sun is out, the grass looks green and the pavement light grey, but inside, everything looks sanguine pinks and reds. i think the connection to the carnivore restaurant and its meaty lighting is all the more vivid and atmospheric for me because i haven't eaten meat in 6 short years...
Bowsmed 25th Nov 2016, 5:40 PM edit delete reply
I'm just realizing this, but with the shaky glass, was that because she was nervous, or because she has two sets of eyes, sorta sending her two separate pictures?
Nobody 25th Nov 2016, 7:41 PM edit delete reply
Nobody
hi bowsmed. the view of the glass is shaky because lola's inebriated; her sobriety and how much she relents or opens up is a common theme in the story.
earlier in the scene she had a glass of something yellow (beer) in a glass different from what regular drinks are served in (this is common in restaurants to identify alcoholic drinks and avoid accidentally serving them to minors).
this is also why the waitress asked her if she wanted another instead of just refilling her drink for her.
it's ambiguous whether she's already taken any pills or not, but she probably did take some before eating, so it's hitting her hard (this is actually why she asked for some water).
rey 21st Dec 2016, 3:20 AM edit delete reply
im excited for the update so i decided to reread the whole comic (which i honestly do almost every other week -- it's kind of like a movie, every time i reread it i notice things that i hadn't before!!) n i love how especially on this page you can see the size difference between sugar's paw and lola's hand, it's so cute oh my gosh
Guest 29th Jan 2017, 7:59 PM edit delete reply
This is more a comment about 1 though now, 28, in my re-read, though focused on the restaurant scene as while past me's last public comment was during this scene, it was kind of, sparse and in the moment.

Anyway from the re-read so far I knew to look for Sugar's eye symbolism and it looks like when her blue eye is in focus is when she's focused inward, of herself, and brown eye focus is when she's focused on Lola, reaching outward? I'm not sure if this is correct, and the other pages might refute it? I'm trying to take it slow and not rush through like that one time i rushed through Secretary to try and impress you, way back when.

I really like how the overall scene balances important monologue information with keeping in mind the setting, like, with the fact there's other people there and realistically a conversation is bound to be interrupted by the hospitality staff.

This last page of the scene, and especially the last panel, looks very tense, like, how you draw them really captures like... I know my body gets physically shaky when it feels like serious relationship vulnerability is at the forefront, and that's how, like, it feels like they're real and tangible. Admittedly I'm not sure on any interpretation on the fork in the steak. My gut impression is that it's a mark of death, like, the reason why when eating with chopsticks to not stick them upright into the unfinished food, but that's probably because of my own heritage and probably isn't applicable to a fork's symbolism? It does still like, make sense in that a theme of the story seems to be death(?)