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19th Nov 2015, 3:00 PM
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Nobody 19th Nov 2015, 3:00 PM edit delete
Nobody
i'll be honest, this was the first page i didn't finish on time. the buffer is back on track now, but it wasn't fun to write, it wasn't fun to draw, and i just feel it's necessary to get the story where it needs to be. so onto next week's update.
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MysteriousJeff 19th Nov 2015, 3:09 PM edit delete reply
I feel your visuals game was very awesome with the thought gears and panel distortion. Sorry it wasn't fun to draw and write though O^O tfw a piece of art feels like that during making it's very commendable you moved on with and past it
henrybemis 19th Nov 2015, 4:10 PM edit delete reply
Visually this is one of my favorite pages because of the elements J mentioned already--the panels' movement works well. Also, Sugar's anger is new to me as a reader? As in, I could decipher that it was there, but knowing their triggers and what sets them off (esp. what they're going to fight over) helps me develop them as a round character in my head (y)
Nobody 19th Nov 2015, 4:17 PM edit delete reply
Nobody
thanks! sugar is short-tempered, but i don't think this is a normal reaction for her, the reasons for which will be kinda elaborated upon in a few updates.
Guest 20th Nov 2015, 1:26 AM edit delete reply
i cant wait to see more!!
Kludge 20th Nov 2015, 2:41 AM edit delete reply
Kludge
Wooo... Sorry you didn't enjoy making this page. I love it nonetheless. The portrayal of Sugar's anger is my favorite.
Guest 4th Nov 2016, 10:48 PM edit delete reply
Hey I'm autistic and don't process sugars anger very well?? Could you please explain what exactly she's bothered by? Sorry. Loving the story though!!
Nobody 5th Nov 2016, 1:53 PM edit delete reply
Nobody
hi guest.
sugar is mentally ill and her specific disorder sometimes just leaves her "agitated", usually from consistent paranoia and fear leaving her on edge; this is why she said she didn't want to interact with anyone on the previous page.
the guy is also hitting on her completely unbidden.
i hope that answers your question!