i'll be honest, this was the first page i didn't finish on time. the buffer is back on track now, but it wasn't fun to write, it wasn't fun to draw, and i just feel it's necessary to get the story where it needs to be. so onto next week's update.
I feel your visuals game was very awesome with the thought gears and panel distortion. Sorry it wasn't fun to draw and write though O^O tfw a piece of art feels like that during making it's very commendable you moved on with and past it
Visually this is one of my favorite pages because of the elements J mentioned already--the panels' movement works well. Also, Sugar's anger is new to me as a reader? As in, I could decipher that it was there, but knowing their triggers and what sets them off (esp. what they're going to fight over) helps me develop them as a round character in my head (y)
thanks! sugar is short-tempered, but i don't think this is a normal reaction for her, the reasons for which will be kinda elaborated upon in a few updates.
hi guest.
sugar is mentally ill and her specific disorder sometimes just leaves her "agitated", usually from consistent paranoia and fear leaving her on edge; this is why she said she didn't want to interact with anyone on the previous page.
the guy is also hitting on her completely unbidden.
i hope that answers your question!
